Problema GMAT Verbal 16/06/14 (SC) (>700)

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Verbal (Sentence Correction) (>700)

The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

(A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being
(B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
(C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet
(D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
(E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

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Verbal (Sentence Correction) (>700)

The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

(A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being
(B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
(C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet
(D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
(E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

Solución propuesta:

respuesta: show

(A) Los modificadores no están bien situados y la segunda frase carece de sujeto
(B) La segunda frase tiene sujeto y verbo y la colocación de los modificadores es correcta. Correcto uso de like para comparar planets y stars
(C) Emplear although y yet en la misma frase resulta redundante
(D) Incorrecto uso de as, que debe emplearse para comparar frases.
(E) La segunda frase carece de sujeto y de verbo. Orden de los modificadores confuso y repetición de "are in motion"

La respuesta correcta es (B)